Story consideration. Blitzen and the Crush...

Well, I made a journal entry right before my contest one (as seen here: fav.me/d6h8e12 ), how after Blitzen Adventures.. I wished to do either one story or another. Not being a patient guy, and frankly should have done this in the first place, I decided to let you all see a visual preview of one such story, and the other very soon!

Oh, and this picture officially introduces Private Sirius Blade!

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The above picture is a scene that happens after Blitzen's report on Alatreon and Ceadeus. Being emotional, Blitzen cried throughout, re-telling the tale, and other details I do not wish to spoil! Although he was in the Royal Chambers with his squad, their Captain, and the Princesses only, a young Night Guard mare, named Sirius Blade, was just getting off-duty, when she over-heard the conversations about Blitzen's adventures.

She always was fascinated with the young colt, as she was only two years older than he was (maturity wise, as he is technically 123...), but admired his sense of emotion and care.. and overall bravery. Regardless, she had other business to care to.

When she came back, Blitzen was gone, and she noticed his tears, which turned to crystals, were on the ground still! She picked them up, and while they do fetch a high price, she knew the rules stated, that ponies should return things to those they belong to.

This scene shows the two talk, and as Sirius sees the still upset Kirin, she offers to talk to him, if he ever needs to... Blitzen, being a gentlecolt, happily agreed, as he still is upset with.. events that happened, and lets the lovely mare keep the tears, and holds her hoof gently with his own claw.

They say, all it takes is a spark.. a lil thing to push a fascination, into a crush.. and that gentleness, along with Blitzen knowing her name, convinced her, that Blitzen is her first crush!

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Hehe, gotta stop myself, as I don't want to spoil the whole story.. but I really like this story, and if you do too, let me know! I am drawing Silhouette's story soon, and if you like that, let me know too!

Thanks all! I hope you like these stories I write!